Changes & Removed Material

A record of meaningful revisions to published chapters of Tomorrow Belongs to Tomorrow. Entries may contain spoilers. Removed passages are earlier drafts and are no longer part of the current novel.

Entries appear newest first within each chapter. Minor corrections generally aren’t recorded. Read about how this novel is being written →

Chapter 1 — Warren Road

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Chapter 2 — It’s a Beautiful Day

Title Changed from “It’s a Beautiful Day” to “17 Days”. Removed Naomi’s early morning.

Chapter 3 — Don’t Jump

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Chapter 4 — Call When You Can

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Chapter 5 — Frosting On The Floor

Title changed from “The Cake” to “Frosting On The Floor”. Added hiking scene, shortened Sophie’s birthday